8/22/14

Ode on my scooter


I can't stop for any one
as I have wings to fly
I can't hate that anyone
Because my love measures the sky

Throwing away my hesitation
avoiding the eyes of penetration
am unwrapping the mysteries of directions
Yeh! It is the only destination.

Now the distance never desperates me
cleaning my review mirror, kicking my scooter
here goes my horse with wheels
on awaiting roads with deals.

- Mythily Kasthuri Rengan

10 comments:

  1. Awesome Mythily, Rule the distance with your horse :)

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  2. Dear Sister,
    I am not well trained in the appreciation of English Literature as you think. Obtaining a degree was my sole objective and the critical literary appraisal was something not on my list of concerns. So, obviously I don’t think I have the adequate acquaintance, let alone the prowess to criticize a poem. I might have learned and taught to analyze a poem in terms of poetic devices such as rhyming, personification, metaphor, but the veiled aesthetics still eludes my grasp. Despite that, the following lines attracts me and I could sense the sputters of poetic embers.
    ''I can't hate that anyone
    Because my love measures the sky
    .......................................
    am unwrapping the mysteries of directions
    .........................................
    here goes my horse with wheels
    on awaiting roads with deals.'


    Thank you.

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    1. to your kind information bro I'm also a learner:) and dis is my try:)) thanks a lot bro!!

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    2. sorry anna! I was little busy yesterday. that's why such a short reply:) I don't know how its happen? really these words caught me on my ride! so its just an overflow of powerful feeling as Wordsworth says:)
      ** Despite that, the following lines attracts me and I could sense the sputters of poetic embers. ** what a poetic review this is!! splendid:) keep visiting anna!!

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    3. I am not well trained in the appreciation of English Literature as you think. //

      Hai! Viju sir are you joking??!!!!! This just says you are modest!

      Your reply itself is poetic! If a person wants to excel in a language, he/she must excel in mother tongue! Thats it!

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  3. ***I can't hate that anyone
    Because my love measures the sky
    I can't hate that anyone
    Because my love measures the sky***

    :-)

    I stop and yield at the stop sign to whoever came before me to that intersection! I don't have wings to fly! :( I just drive to places!

    I certainly HATE some arrogant morons wholeheartedly! I can not love everyone in the world! :(

    So, I cant write a beautiful poem like this either as I am different from Mythily K R! Neither did I study English literature! :=)

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  4. ** I don't have wings to fly! ** :)) dis is about my first experience with my scooty:)
    ** I can not love everyone in the world! :(** BUT you can love some one. let them be in bold letters :)) what a great difference between us!!! the only thing I hate very much is the word HATE :) because if I hate somebody, it means I am giving that one some preference. I don't want to waste a single minute of my life by hating someone. sorry.this is not at all a lecture indeed Varun:)
    **So, I cant write a beautiful poem like this **
    is that true?? o! thanks a lot :)

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  5. sorry for the belated reply, sister.

    I can't hate that anyone
    Because my love measures the sky
    my horse with wheels
    on awaiting roads with deals.// superb!

    Kudos! Really a good job! We are also not that good in English language (like viju sir who is proficient in both languages, english as well as tamil) to appraise literature, poems...etc...

    we will get back to you.

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  6. O!! thank you so much dear friends:)))
    **We are also not that good in English language (like viju sir who is proficient in both languages, english as well as tamil) to appraise literature, poems...etc...***
    this is too much guys!! then am I well versed in English? please understand friends ,am just a beginner :)) **we will get back to you. ** :))) thank you!!

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